Can someone Please rate this story? It's called The Return of Reja. I'm 13. I hope you like it.?

I am rating your story in a critics point of view,so don't take anything personally! I really like the details that you have used but one thing that I would change is the Wha -Wha,This is in the second paragraph and its the second sentence...If your story is taking into an end where you are wrting about wizards and all then you shouldn't use that okay with the wha-wha....you can use that once but like this"wha..what are you doin?" I hope you didn't take anything personally and I am saying this becuase I am a writer as well....I have also been critized a lot. If you want to coutine wrting then you will have to hear harsh comments:D